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Fan Fiction - Star Wars: Relics of the Force (set 835 ABY)
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ebertran
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2021 9:56 pm    Post subject: Fan Fiction - Star Wars: Relics of the Force (set 835 ABY) Reply with quote
Hi! Working on a Star Wars fan fiction screenplay as a fun practice exercise.

I'm up to the first 35 pages and was looking for a little bit of feedback as to whether or not the story is working and my structure is sound... Anybody willing to give it a look?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1K8sa0Yt6jPxTTjtSLmSan3NzpIwJD9sk/view?usp=sharing
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2021 11:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Looks decent on first read-through.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2021 2:11 pm    Post subject: Fan Fiction - Star Wars: Relics of the Force (set 835 ABY) Reply with quote
ebertran wrote:
Hi! Working on a Star Wars fan fiction screenplay as a fun practice exercise.

I'm up to the first 35 pages and was looking for a little bit of feedback as to whether or not the story is working and my structure is sound... Anybody willing to give it a look?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1K8sa0Yt6jPxTTjtSLmSan3NzpIwJD9sk/view?usp=sharing

Thanks for sharing. Part of your thread topic got cut off due to a character limit, so I slightly edited it to show the info I think you were trying to convey. I hope that is ok.
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