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You have Leia Organna - two n instead of one.
You have Torrent's stats, a space, and then the Creatures section title. You don't have a space before the Droid section title.
I don't think Kamino's a world in the Inner Rim. Rather it's a remote world in the Outer Rin Territories. |
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| Forceally wrote: | You have Leia Organna - two n instead of one.
You have Torrent's stats, a space, and then the Creatures section title. You don't have a space before the Droid section title. |
Excellent formatting mistakes you caught, corrected.
| Forceally wrote: | | I don't think Kamino's a world in the Inner Rim. Rather it's a remote world in the Outer Rin Territories. |
Kamino stats are not included in this book, just some flavor text.
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| Well, you have Inner Rim, and you have Kamino listed under it. It should be in the Outer Rim Territories section. |
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| Forceally wrote: | | Well, you have Inner Rim, and you have Kamino listed under it. It should be in the Outer Rim Territories section. |
Ahhhhhh. Okay now I understand. Though I agree that Kamino should be in the Outer Rim I believe it actually is located in Wild Space. But I will quickly fix it. Thanks again!
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| shootingwomprats wrote: | | Forceally wrote: | | Well, you have Inner Rim, and you have Kamino listed under it. It should be in the Outer Rim Territories section. |
Ahhhhhh. Okay now I understand. Though I agree that Kamino should be in the Outer Rim I believe it actually is located in Wild Space. But I will quickly fix it. Thanks again! |
Yeah, Kamino is not even in the main Star Wars galaxy, in Canon or Legends, so it is definitely not the Outer Rim. The EU does consider Kamino as a part of "Wildspace." The canon designation is only "extragalactic."
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Alecia Beck: you have tranctor beams when I think you mean tractor beam.
Caluan Ematt: you have run instead of running in the stats.
Leia Organa: you have Organna in the section head of her stats.
WA-7 Server droid has stats in the Droid Stats PDF.
Cyrkon Extraction: Shortly after the Battle of Yaving... Should be Yavin.
V-40: pQral Concepts V-40 Sport Speeder - did you do a typo with "pQral"?
You have 1550-LEX Yacht, but in the stats you have Craft: Gallo Venture EE-730 Transport. The same thing happened in the Miss Fortune/Serendipity stats - EE-730 Transport when the craft in question is actually a 1550-LEX Yacht. |
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