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cheshire Arbiter-General (Moderator)

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Posted: Sun May 15, 2011 6:41 am Post subject: |
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Looking pretty good. _________________ __________________________________
Before we take any of this too seriously, just remember that in the middle episode a little rubber puppet moves a spaceship with his mind. |
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fission Cadet


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Posted: Sun May 15, 2011 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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it is the only things i find for these characters . And my english is not as good to make the link between two sentence sorry |
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cheshire Arbiter-General (Moderator)

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Posted: Sun May 15, 2011 9:44 pm Post subject: |
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If it will make you feel better, I'll do some editing and work on sentence transitions.
Hopefully next week I can jump in and do a few bios myself. _________________ __________________________________
Before we take any of this too seriously, just remember that in the middle episode a little rubber puppet moves a spaceship with his mind. |
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Solas Cadet

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Posted: Tue May 17, 2011 4:51 am Post subject: |
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cheshire wrote: | It just means you rock. Gry has the final say-so, but I don't see how he's going to find anything wrong with write ups with this quality. |
Thank you so much.
I'll get to work and have some more done for you this week. Figure I might start from the bottom and work my way up.
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fission Cadet


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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 7:42 am Post subject: |
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Chi Eekway Papanoida
Chi Eekway Papanoida was a female Pantoran senator of the planet Wroona.and also the daughter of Baron Papanoida.
Eekway was a member of the inner circle of loyalists that advised Chancellor Palpatine during the trying times of war and she became incrementally concerned with the Chancellor's increasing emergency powers. She was among the senators who were determined to preserve democracy. She had control of some unaligned trader guilds, a fact that was unusual for such a young senator. She was very spiritual, visible in her clothing and her great levels of empathy.
Sometime during the Clone Wars, Chi and her sister Che Amanwe Papanoida were kidnapped by Rodian bounty hunter Greedo at their Coruscant home. He was aided by a Gotal assistant, who grabbed an unsuspecting Eekway, followed by Che. The two were separated, and with the help of Pantoran Senator Riyo Chuchi and Jedi Padawan Ahsoka Tano, Chi was rescued from Separatist clutches.
Eekway did contact Papanoida at the Galaxies Opera House during the performance of Squid Lake to receive important information for the Loyalists. She was accompanied by her friend and advisor Terr Taneel, who was actually keeping a close eye on Eekway; Taneel secretly harbored fears Eekway had ambitions to politically outshine her. |
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fission Cadet


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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 7:51 am Post subject: |
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Coleman Kcaj
Coleman Kcaj was a male Ongree Jedi Master serving the Jedi Order during the final years of the Republic Classic era.
Following years of tension between the Separatist Confederacy of Independent Systems and the Galactic Republic, the conflict came to a head on Geonosis with the capture of Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, and Senator Padmé Amidala. Under the leadership of Master of the Order Mace Windu, Master Kcaj was part of the strike team that landed around the Petranaki arena on an extraction mission. Storming the arena, Kcaj fought along his brother and sister Jedi, including fellow Ongree Jedi Pablo-Jill, cutting down countless battle droids. Surviving the conflict, Kcaj returned to the Jedi Temple and accepted the rank of General within the newly created Grand Army of the Republic.
After nearly two years of fighting, Master Kcaj was approached by the High Council and offered a seat on the august and noble body. Replacing esteemed Jedi Master Oppo Rancisis after his death at the hands of Dark Jedi Sora Bulq on Saleucami, Kcaj would help shape the Republic war effort for the remainder of the conflict. Shortly following the battle over Coruscant, Kcaj attended a performance of Squid Lake at the Galaxies Opera House, where he was seen speaking with Senator Sweitt Concorkill shortly before the show.
In the following days, Jedi Anakin Skywalker was appointed to the High Council by Supreme Chancellor Palpatine, an unprecedented move that disturbed the Council. Not long after this event, the Chancellor was revealed to be the Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Sidious, the orchestrator of the entire war, and the puppet master of both the Republic and the Confederacy. Whether news of this deception reached the entire High Council before the execution of Contingency Order 66 by the Grand Army or the fall of the Jedi Temple is unknown, as is Coleman Kcaj's fate during the Great Jedi Purge |
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fission Cadet


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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 7:54 am Post subject: |
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Delva Racine
Delva Racine was a cutting-edge fashion designer. Her outwardly-human appearance was altered by the strange eye goggles and the horn-like mask that covered her nose and mouth.
She was one of the many patrons seen milling about the Galaxies Opera House during the Squid Lake performance. Her scandalous designs were based on Outer Rim Territories cultures. As a result, her summer Kubaz collection was heavily criticized by the media. |
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fission Cadet


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Posted: Sat May 21, 2011 7:59 am Post subject: |
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Fang Zar
Fang Zar was a male Human who served as the senator of the Sern sector during the waning years of the Galactic Republic and the early days of the Galactic Empire. He was an outspoken opponent of the centralization of power experienced by the Republic during Supreme Chancellor Palpatine's time in office and became involved with a secret organization of Loyalists known as the Republic Group. Zar was a key member in the group's plan to "restore honor to the Republic" by revealing the Insignia of Unity; however, intervention by the Senate Bureau of Intelligence left the plan in obscurity for decades. His opposition to Palpatine eventually led him to become a member of the Delegation of 2000, a group of senators and representatives who disapproved of the sweeping amendments made to the Galactic Constitution over the course of the Clone Wars. Shortly after the Battle of Coruscant, Zar accompanied other members of the Delegation to present the Petition of 2000 to Palpatine in the hope that the Supreme Chancellor would begin to relinquish some of the powers granted to him by the constitutional amendments.
The Delegation's plea fell on deaf ears, and Palpatine seized absolute power, transforming the Republic into the Galactic Empire at the close of the Clone Wars. The new Galactic Emperor targeted members of the Delegation of 2000 as traitors to the Empire, and Zar was detained for a time by the Imperial Security Bureau. Upon release, he was ordered to remain on Coruscant; however, the Sern Prime native abandoned his post as senator and fled to Alderaan. There, Zar was granted political asylum by Bail Prestor Organa, a founding member of the Delegation of 2000. After residing in the Aldera Royal Palace for several weeks, Zar's flight from Coruscant was revealed to the Emperor, who dispatched Darth Vader to retrieve the former senator and return him to the Imperial Security Bureau..... |
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Solas Cadet

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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 10:07 am Post subject: |
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Sorry to take so long! I have four entires for you today, and I'll be working my way up from the bottom of the list and saving the big name characters for last.
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Solas Cadet

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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 10:07 am Post subject: |
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Zo Howler
Zo Howler was an Anx of the Gravlex Med system and was a sociable and approachable being, in as much as any Anx (with their highly social and cooperative societal instincts) could be. Howler was however a campaigner for improving the social status of not only his own people but of the Gravlex Med system itself.
Zo Howler had the high distinction of being the successor to Horox Ryder representing the Raiobollo Sector, which literally encompassed thousands of worlds and systems. The venerable Ryder had served under Chancellor Valorum and was part of a small delegation of senators who sought to introduce reforms to reduce corruption in the Galactic Senate.
Howler however was no newcomer to politics, having been President of Gravlex Med leading into the Separatist Crisis, which eventually caused Ryder’s retirement. Hand-chosen by Ryder along with Ryder’s long serving aide Fo Kuna, Howler became a staunch supporter and founding member of the Loyalist Committee, something his predecessor had worked towards. Being an Anx, Howler felt especially devoted to this cause as much as he felt dedicated to being a Galactic Senator.
It is unknown if Zo Howler was part of the Delegation of 2000 that went to Coruscant in order to deliver the petition of the same name, but it is known that as perhaps part of a punitive measure against his people, the newly-formed Empire would go on to use the Anx homeworld as a weapons testing ground. The proponents of peace and stable society would pay nearly the ultimate price for their actions. Zo Howler’s fate remains unknown. |
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Solas Cadet

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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 10:08 am Post subject: |
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Zett Jukassa
Born originally Warpoc Skamini on the Mid-Rim world of Mon Gazza, Jukassa was found and identified at a young age to be Force sensitive, and his parents Sembric and Ashielle gave consent for the boy to be trained at the Jedi Temple on Coruscant.
A thoughtful and insightful child, it became rapidly apparent that the boy had the Jedi ability of Farsight when he became deeply troubled by visions of his parents’ murder on his homeworld, but was confused as he did not know his heritage, a standard Jedi Order practice. The boy’s suffering reached the attention of Jedi Knight Mierme Unill, who, with the permission of the Jedi Council, began to investigate the boy’s background along with Jedi historian and librarian, Jocasta Nu.
Intended just to relieve the boy’s suffering, the librarian and Jedi Knight related to Jukassa the details of the murder which in turn led (guided by the boy’s insight) to Unill revealing connections to the criminal organisation Black Sun. These in turn led to arrests and the conclusion of Unill’s investigation. Jukassa had shown maturity and emotional strength in the situation, and so Unill took the boy on as his Padawan.
However, the relationship was short-lived, for not long after the Clone Wars began and Unill was made a Commander in the Grand Army of the Republic. During the many conflicts, Unill was struck down in combat, leaving the sixteen-year old orphaned and with no Master to train him. The Battlemaster of the Jedi Temple, Cin Drallig, was given the duty of being his Master temporarily as the great war raged around them.
Zett’s ability to see into the future had not had the chance to be developed during the war, and so it was he, along with so many others, did not see the emergence of Chancellor Palpatine as a Sith Lord along with his apprentice, Darth Vader. His first awareness of the situation was when Shaak Ti thrust a lightsaber into his hands as the temple itself went on high alert, the clarion call of Order 66 repeated as Vader himself and his troops entered the temple and began a massacre unheard of in the history of the Jedi.
Jukassa fought his way to the upper levels of the Temple to the hangar towers, only to encounter nine Clone Troopers under the command of Commander Apo. On the other side of them appeared a speeder belonging to Bail Organa, who had come to see what the cause of the fires was that were engulfing the Temple. Seeing his chance to escape, Jukassa struck down seven of the troopers, and wounded Commander Apo, only to be killed by an accurate blaster bolt fired from Apo’s second, Sergeant Fox. In shock and disbelief, Organa fled the scene lest he be apprehended himself.
The last time Jukassa was seen was at the burning of his body along with all those who had died in the massacre, his bright and promising future betrayed and destroyed on the steps of the Jedi Temple, which now burned as a monument to the increasingly bleak future of the Jedi themselves. |
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Solas Cadet

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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 10:09 am Post subject: |
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Whie Malreaux
Whie Malreaux’s story was one of irony and repercussions of conflicts past. Born on the world of Vjun, he was gifted (or so it had seemed) with an unusually high midichlrorian count, due to the machinations of his father, the Viscount Malreaux. He had experimented on a grand scale with the entire population of Vjun, and the increased levels of midichlorians were driving the inhabitants insane.
At barely four years old, Whie was rescued from this horrible fate by his mother, who, drunk and descending into madness, gave him to a passing Jedi to be trained. Before the Jedi could save more children, the populace destroyed itself, with the Viscount seen only once in his highly secure tower, stealing food from his own kitchens.
His first (but not last) meeting with Anakin Skywalker saw him hug the older Jedi in a fit of near-hysteria, glad, as he put it that ‘you’re not coming to kill me!’ These words would prove to be fatefully prophetic for the young Padawan. Despite the precepts of the Order, Whie also found himself attracted to a young Padawan called Tallisibeth Enwandung-Esterhazy, or ‘Scout’ to her fellow younglings. While not as gifted as Whie in the Force, an abiding friendship developed between the pair.
Whie marked his return to his homeworld (without knowing it) in pursuit of Count Dooku, who had made the Malreaux castle his personal fortress. Personally chosen in a group that included himself and Scout, along with their Masters Mak Leem and Jai Maruk, they were to apprehend Dooku along with Jedi Master Yoda. However, he dreamt of his own death in a vision, something that greatly troubled him.
Inside the castle, the four encountered the Sith apprentice Asajj Ventress, who not only slew Whie and Scout’s Masters, but took both Padawans captive. Sensing Whie’s feelings for Scout, Ventress attempted to turn Whie to the Dark Side by threatening Scout’s life. In a show of strength and character, Whie resisted the temptation and saved both their lives by delaying Ventress long enough for help to arrive and them both to survive.
Despite losing his Master, Whie felt that any fate that would befall him could be bested. This was to prove tragically wrong.
The fate that bound him inextricably to the Sith came to pass with the enacting of Order 66. Sparring with another youngling and Temple Battlemaster Cin Drallig, the newly-christened Darth Vader entered, killing Whie instantly with a strike across his chest. It was as he had dreamed but tried to ignore, and his reputation was stained further by the Empire by the false accusation that Whie was mind-controlling the Temple District and was killed to protect the Empire. The last opportunity for the Malreaux family to escape the Dark Side was instead consumed by it. |
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Solas Cadet

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Posted: Wed May 25, 2011 10:10 am Post subject: |
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Tundra Dowmeia
Memorable for his baritone voice and distinctive clammy grip (something common to all Quarren), Tundra Dowmeia (meaning both ‘bold’ and ‘speaker for the clutch’ in Mon Cal) was a progressively-thinking member of his species who believed in equality for not only his own people, but the Mon Calamari as well. In addition to this, his concern for the Outer Rim Territories and their people also concerned him greatly and this put him in turn towards a career in politics.
Declaring himself a Loyalist to the Republic, Tundra was openly in opposition to the current Senator of the time, Tikkes and his Quarren Isolation League, that wanted nothing to do with the Mon Cal and other species. When it was revealed that Tikkes was involved with slave trade activities, Tundra was quickly appointed the new Senator for Mon Cal. His first act was to declare that the Quarren would assist the Republic in any way possible after Tikkes escaped house arrest on Coruscant. His progressive attitude was criticized by many Quarren who saw him as nothing but a Republic puppet and supporter of the Mon Cal.
Shortly thereafter with the outbreak of the Clone Wars and the rise of the Confederacy of Independent Systems, Dowmeia was seen to be a vocal and strong supporter of Chancellor Palpatine and openly applauded Palpatine’s announcement of emergency powers to deal with the situation. However, the former Senator Tikkes had already pledged Mon Cal’s support to the Confederacy and his actions plunged Mon Cal into civil war.
Because of Dowmeia’s support, the Republic swiftly intervened and the Quarren Isolation League were brought down. This didn’t prevent slicers attempting to steal information from the Mon Cal Shipyards and Tundra dedicated himself to not only improving the security of the shipyards, but the capture of those responsible.
With the end of the civil war, Dowmeia made a point of signing the peace accords between the Quarren and Mol Calamari, which in turn allowed joint representation of the species in the Senate, with the Mon Cal Senator Meena Tills joining him. This was not without controversy; despite his open declaration of bipartisanship in Mon Cal’s dealings with other species, many Quarren saw this as damaging not only to Dowmeia’s career but essentially acting only for Mon Calamari interests.
Near to the conclusion of the Clone Wars, Tundra was present when the Chancellor was kidnapped by General Grevious and was amongst the first to congratulate Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker, even insisting that the latter come to his personal estate on Mon Calamari, only to be politely rebuffed, as Skywalker sought out his true concern, his wife.
Dowmeia and Tills became deeply concerned with Palpatine’s emergency powers and became a part of the Delegation of 2000, determined to present Palpatine with a petition to find a peaceful solution to the crisis. Few were as shocked and disillusioned as Dowmeia when not only did he not even get to present the petition to Palpatine, but he was arrested and taken away, not even getting to hear the speech that would transform the Republic into the newly-forged Galactic Empire. Dowmeia was arrested as an enemy of the state and disappeared, one of the first casualties of the return of the Sith. |
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fission Cadet


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Posted: Thu May 26, 2011 7:23 am Post subject: |
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cheshire can you tell us if the biography are good or not ?
Que la Force soit avec vous |
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cheshire Arbiter-General (Moderator)

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Posted: Thu May 26, 2011 2:56 pm Post subject: |
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Coleman Kcaj's bio could use some editing. The nuances of the English language and the general way that we set up the flow of a paragraph gets interrupted here. Zo Howler looks really good.
Zett Jukassa's bio is quite good, as is Tundra Dowmeia's.
I have some questions concerning Whie Malreaux. It appears to cover material that seems to follow in the Clone Wars cartoons, and I think that we're trying to keep this to the material that surrounds Revenge of the Sith. It raises two questions 1) what is the timline in which he interacts with Ventress. Is it during the ROTS movie, or before? And 2) is this something we want to include if it is happening during the movie as it highly involves an Expanded Universe character. I'm willing to dialog on these points. _________________ __________________________________
Before we take any of this too seriously, just remember that in the middle episode a little rubber puppet moves a spaceship with his mind. |
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